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Friday, May 8, 2020

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  1. MrsKerinMay 8, 2020 at 2:45 PM

    Hi Shannan, you have found some good facts. an introduction is always good as then the reader knows what your learning is. Also, try adding the sites that you got the information from.

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  2. Becks TeagueMay 11, 2020 at 10:15 PM

    hi Shannan, I like how you've found some facts here. Five hours is a long time to hold their breath! Next time, try adding some more images and thinking about grouping your sentences together under different headings, eg. diet, habitat.

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  3. Ms CattonMay 12, 2020 at 9:48 AM

    Kia ora Shannon
    You have found some really interesting facts about turtles. Could you include your source next time so we know where to find more information. Wow i did not know they could hold their breath for five hours. Wouldn't it be cool if we could do that too? Well done.

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  4. AnonymousMay 14, 2020 at 9:44 AM

    Shannon this is really good but you might need to add more pictures and colour

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  5. AnonymousMay 28, 2020 at 12:14 PM

    thanks everyone for the nice comments

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